- “that Star Trek moment”
- “it seemed to get in your way”
- “baffled”
- “would urge you to reconsider”
- your own voice, explaining
Fortunately, Leta and her team didn’t hear anything like these after their lovely presentation of Clean, by Audrey Cefaly, at ESTA in Newark, Del., but rather a few constructive suggestions (“maybe a puddle of water at the opening”) and lots of compliments like “detailed,” “believable,” and “specific.”