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20 may '97

The Weight of Water, a novel by Anita Shreve

Tuned to the same frequency established by A.S. Byatt's Possession and Tom Stoppard's Arcadia, Anita Shreve's latest novel tells a nineteenth-century tale of love and murder. Intertwined with this story is one of a present-day attempt to reconstruct, to capture, the story from the past. Resonances between the two narratives show themselves gradually, like something from deep in the ocean brought up to the surface. We read matching stories of multiple infidelities, crimes of passion, and death.

"No one can know a story's precise reality," says modern-times narrator Jean, and neither of Shreve's narrators tell all that they do know. As Jean switches between her own story and her reading of the official account of the 1873 crimes, the cuts are razor-sharp, creating a delicious tension. Between Jean's chapters are passages from Maren's eyewitness account of the past events. If some of the passages dealing with courtroom testimony seem lifeless and dull, perhaps it's because this version of events is farthest from the truth.

Shreve does well with narrative detail: a Mr. Hjorth, part of Maren's journal, is introduced, crosses the Atlantic, and dies of dysentery within the span of one subordinate clause.

This is a fine, well-paced novel of "pleasure and death and rage and tenderness, all intermingled."

9 may '97

How Late It Was How Late, a novel by James Kelman

The arrival of James Kelman's celebrated novel in this country was preceded by its reputation as a foul-mouthed, impenetrable exercise in Scottish dialect. No question, it is not an easy book to understand, or to like. Dialogue pops up almost without warning, and certainly without a hint of punctuation; the narrative slips from third to second person, often within the course of a paragraph. And then there is the vocabulary.

But these devices serve the ends of the book, the portrayal of a down-and-out, the pettiest of petty outlaws, one Sammy. He is not without his endearing traits, including his taste for American country music. Like most of us, Sammy has a bad attitude about bureaucrats of all sorts -- it just that he finds himself after these encounters bleeding on the pavement. From the profoundest depths, he speaks in universal rhythms that reveal the poetry of despair:

Ye wake in a corner and stay there hoping yer body will disappear, the thoughts smothering ye; but ye want to remember and face up to things, just something keeps ye from doing it, why can ye no do it; the words filling yer head: then the other words.... He shivered and hunched up his shoulders, shut his eyes, rubbed into the corners with his fingertips; seeing all kinds of spots and lights.

Equal parts Bright Lights, Big City and Waiting for Godot, this rewarding novel is worth the struggle that it is to read.

4 may '97

Some Instructions to My Wife, a novel by Stanley Crawford

The nameless narrator of Stanley Crawford's book has something in common with today's survivalists of Ruby Ridge and the Republic of Texas. Isolated in his hillside homestead, growing most of his own food, he would create the perfect family -- Husband, Wife, Son, and Daughter. Not at all a conventional narrative, Some Instructions... is his guidebook to the good life.

And what a regimented, joyless life it is. Attached to the back of every cupboard door is a list of the cupboard's contents. For his daughter, still a toddler, he has prepared a toy washing machine for doll clothes. The warmth that he must have felt for his wife, at least once, breaks through in shadowy asides and subordinate clauses.

Crawford himself is a grower (read his nonfiction A Garlic Testament) and his narrator shows the farmer's wisdom in the chapter "Waiting."

But his narrator is pathetically trapped in his own control fantasy. By giving his son a bicycle and toy cars, he somehow expects the boy to extrapolate to driving the real thing. In his ridiculous fight to protect his children from all harm, he reveals the helplessness that every parent feels.

The joke of this book may wear a little thin, after a while. But it is a fascinating look at certain ideas carried to their logical conclusion and beyond: home schooling, living in harmony with the land, "family values." This is an interesting, scary, and peculiar book.

14 april '97

The Beach, a novel by Alex Garland

Alex Garland's slacker thriller is a new entry into the utopian canon.

Backpacking narrator Richard is on a vague search for the last untouristed bit of the world. He sets off for a hidden, nameless island in the Gulf of Thailand with two casual acquaintances and a shadowy sidekick; he finds a tropical Eden, peopled by a collaborative international tribe of neo-hippies. But even his first meeting with the settlers sounds a sinister note, and things will only get worse, at their own hallucinatory, harrowing pace.

Been-there, done-that Richard has a descriptive gift as sharp as South Asian spices. Here, he is watching a boy swimming in a filthy Bangkok canal:

When the kid surfaced, he looked at me again, treading water. The motion of his arms cleared a circle in the floating litter. Shredded polystyrene that, for a moment, looked like soapsuds.

Did Richard bring the spores of Eden's destruction with him? This is one of the questions left to the reader in this exciting, well-crafted debut.

30 mar '97

Medieval in LA, by Jim Paul

Jim Paul's glimpses of life in Southern California, seen through a prism of 2000 years of Western thought, are often rewarding. Paul combines sketches of the life and work of philosophers like Bishop Berkeley, musings on contemporaries like the composer John Cage, and fictionalized portraits of his own friends and acquaintances. His prose makes the dusty theologians of history come alive.

Some good moments are to be found, like the story of his friend Lloyd, a artist. Paul finds a worn-out turkey baster in Lloyd's studio. Lloyd had saved it "without fully knowing why. This was his prerogative as an artist and actually the source and soul of art, this ability to allow an impulse to exist and manifest itself in objects without requiring of them a conscious reason or an excuse, only responding to a personal feeling of rightness, of connection -- pure particularity, insisted upon, observed, apprehended."

Likewise the story of Bertolt Brecht's work in Hollywood on a production of his own Galileo, followed by a summons to appear before the House Committee on Un-American Activities, is a well-selected example of the odd coincidences that pass for commonplace in LA. But anecdotes about the film career of Jessica Lange seem pointless.

In the end, the pieces don't add up to much that's insightful. The narrative's triggering incident turns out to have little effect on events, after all. But you may find the book to be an engaging read on your next flight to the coast.

15 mar '97

I Was Amelia Earhart, a novel by Jane Mendelsohn

Jane Mendelsohn's first novel neither warrants the high praise given by other reviewers, nor is it without merit. This admittedly brief book is a series of moods and impressions that wash over one another, like waves on the island beach where Earhart is stranded. This is not a story for those of the action-picture mentality.

Mendelsohn writes compact prose in winningly direct images: "In the Electra the light is blue. There's a smell of gasoline." But elsewhere, an effective metaphor in the opening pages reappears so often that it loses its power.

There just isn't enough material here. Pages given over to epigraphs (Woolf, Defoe, and Bronte) and acknowledgements are too much like padding. In the end, this is an undemanding fantasy that will please many readers.

13 mar '97

The Error of Our Ways, a novel by David Carkeet

Two unexpectedly endearing men act and react in David Carkeet's entertaining comic novel. Smug, successful businessman Ben is alternately baffled by and devoted to his daughters. Childless, hapless, and generally clueless Jeremy is an unemployed linguist, vaguely attached to the university where his wife teaches. Forced to endure one another at their first meeting, Ben and Jeremy find they can't avoid stumbling over one another in the course of the book's events.

Carkeet's accomplishment is the clear depiction of each of Ben's children (or, as his vanity plates would have it, his "4 GIRLZ"). Toddler Molly, with perfect comic timing, nearly steals the show. If the adult women in this book are a bit underdeveloped, at least Ben's secretary, with a newly-found interest in bad knock-knock jokes, is a doozy.

Hilarious set pieces include Ben's midnight chase through suburban St. Louis of his hellion middle-schooler Pam, all the while negotiating via cell phone with a South Asian supplier with a taste for the Kama Sutra.

This engaging book comes to a fitting, unpredictable, and somewhat downbeat conclusion.


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